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  I am…

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I am a girl that tries her best

I wonder what I could be when I grow up?

I hear loud and proud voices of my family surrounding me.  I see the clear bright sky with shining puffy clouds.

I want to make the world a better place.

I am a girl. That tries her best.

I pretend that I have wings and I see rainbows in the sky.

I feel the fresh air falling upon me and the hot air burning me.

I touch the soft fur from my english bull terrier with my hand.

I worry about what others might say and do.

I cry about puppies that have been hurt or have passed away.

I am a girl. That tries her best.

I understand that people sometimes get things right and sometimes wrong.  

I say that not everyone is right and not everyone is wrong we are all in the middle.

I dream of being me but I have a pet unicorn and I can fly and talk to animals.

I try to work my best and I show pride.

I hope that one day I could see the bright and shimmering  stars.

I am a girl. That tries her best

I am learning to write about my poem and me and want I want to be and what I hope and things like that.

Something that challenged me was Putting in my ides in the poem I could not think what I wanted to use so I asked the teacher and she helped me get some ides for my poem.

I am proud of my poem because I put my personal best in it and I tried with all I could,I also put me in the poem so who ever reads it I hope they feel the same way I do when I read my poem.

What I found hard was When I was doing I hope, Because I could not think of what I could do then I thought about writing there's a puppy at the end of my bed but then Mrs H said I should do something that I really want. Like I want to see the stars because I cant see much stars at night like when everyone else see millions and I see one or two or sometimes I get lucky and I see four or five.

By Pippa

My Art

This is my scotcher of me

What do my letters stand for P stands for Pippa and on the letter P I have drawn symbols  for Minecraft. on my letter I i have drawn doggy paws because I love dogs, I have drawn some paint  on my P because i love painting, I have drawn bones because I love dogs and they love bones and I have drawn hearts because I love hearts. 

What did I learn while I was making my art how to make this amazing piece of art, and how to not give up when it gets tough, Also when I was about to give up Mrs Hill came and helped me and I was not going to give up after that. I had to paint over again and again because it all went crazy.

What challenged me was when I was painting and the paint kept going on the other side were I  was going to draw on. I tried wiping the paint off with baby wipes but it did not work so I just drew over it. It was lucky it did not show hat bad on the side I draw on.

What I enjoyed about making my art was when I was painting and everyone 

was going past giving people advice and everyone helping each other. Also when I was making my art I was having trouble cutting my letters out and Nevaeh helped me shape them so I could cut it out. 

Camp Omatua

Had fun at the park with everyone on they way to camp it was a fun break.

While waiting for our dessert to cook we all
were asked to pull our funny faces and Mrs Jackett
took our pictures. 

One of our challenge was football for my group it was
Girls V Boys but this is not my group in the photo. At
I first through it would be really boring but when we
started playing it got really fun. I really enjoyed playing
Football.  

Dressing up the adults to be mummies and
Martin walk down the path and gave as such I
fright we all screamed. We each got an adult to
dress up I got Fiona we dressed her up but not all
the way. I really like dressing up the adults
it was really fun. 

Had so much fun at the pools hanging out and swimming and playing.

Making back packs in the hall it was very hard but fun as well
I really liked making them and having to work as a team.
I really enjoyed camp thank you
Mrs Jackett Mrs Ramsay and Mrs Hill.  

My biggest challenge was  fear factor because it was scary. I got butterfly's in my tummy having to were (wear) a blind fold over my eyes and then having to eat the creepy food. It was really cool to watch the people taking the challenge to eat the food. I thought that our hub showed really good pride in taking risks.

One of my favorite parts at camp was spending time with everyone and getting to know them better . I did like the back packs challenge that we did it was fun and really enjoyable. 


My biggest achievement was at football because I did not want to do it, but I tried and really enjoyed it. 
I am really proud of myself because we won the game at football, I hope next time I might win again. It was fun at football slipping and sliding on the wet grass as well as the
cold rain was dripping on us.  


What I enjoyed was the challenges at camp, it was really fun.  I can't wait to go again .  

              

My trap Door writing

Shivering me and Ellee walked back from school. It was cold as winter the trees were wrestling and the ground was like icey snow. “Pippa its like 0 degrees out here” yelled Ellee. I didn't speak a word I was like an ice cube. Then a big gush of wind made Ellees bag go flying.

“Ahhh quick my bag, get it,” yelled Ellee. I jumped up and caught it by my finger.

“Here you go,” I said.

“Wait what's that you're standing on Pippa” asked Ellee. “Oh this, um I dont know,” I answered.

“I will open it,” Ellee replied.

“ahh okay,” I shivered.

She opened the trapdoor “What! theres nothing in here but dirt,” Ellee yelled in disapointed.

They walked in. Ellee was right there was nothing but dirt. Ellee leaned against the wall and a crack bang bong the dirt disappeared.They looked through it was beautiful there were pine trees sand and fruit for days it had a sign they read it it said welcome to hawaii. They both gasped

“Hawaii but how” Pippa said.

Ellee shrugged her shoulders. They keeped looking around they found dens and tents even pet cages. It was extraordinary. It was like a dream. They walked and came to a big house it was even beautiful than their own house. It had two doors there was a pond and a tree house. Suddenly they heard a voice it sounded like a old old person “Hello my name is tom i live here” he said kindly “Okay” Pippa said “let's go play” Ellee said “okay why not” i answered. They went off to play. Next day they walked back to the house he was nowhere to be seen they looked all around they found a paper in a bottle they opened the bottle and read it <Follow the railway then it will take you  to a cave go through the cave and you will see> (the rest was rubbed out). They decided to find the railway. It took one hour to finally find the railway they followed it for 10min when they finally found the cave it had cob webs and spiders and mossy stone steps they crept in the cave slowly they walked in. They started to see a little glow as they crept closer it got brighter and brighter. When they finally got there they saw gold iron even diamonds also my favorite amethyst. They both gasped “Look at all this treasure were going to be rich” Ellee said happily. Just as Pippa was about to say something a key necklace jumped on Pippa and Ellees neck. “Wow look at these cool necklaces” Pippa explained Ellee said “it feels so--just then Ellee disappeared” Pippa touches her necklace and she disappeared just like Ellee. They were back where they started by the trapdoor “wow all we need to do is touch our necklace and we will go back there” Pippa said with a smile. Then Ellee noticed something...




I have been learning to be a better writer and go back an re-read it so it makes senses. 
I am proud of because I tried and did not give up and I did my personal best to add detail.
Next time i could make changes to some words to be more exciting.
I really enjoyed making my trap door writing and using my imagination.  

Presentation

I have been learning to add detail and about sisters also to structure my ideas. I am prod(proud) of it because I worked on it a lot and I can teach people about sister. Something that challenges me was explaining it in my own words. Next time I could do nothing because I worked my hardest and I did my best. I really enjoined making my presentation and learning more about how to and making it.

this year

This year has been Amazing i love how at the start of the year hardly know one new each other and now we are like a family i just think this year has been great i hope all the year 6 have a great life and i think everyone had a amazing year i hope everyone at Parkvale school has a nice year and Christmas. Love Pippa

the rabbit Tom and fox Timmy

               

 

Once upon a time there lived a rabbit named Tom one day when Tom went to the stream to get

some water Tom saw a fox and his name was Timmy so Timmy the fox came over to Tom and said, 'do you want to come for a walk?’  ‘ok,' said Tom. 'Goode,'  said Timmy.

So they set off and went to the stream, as they got closer they saw a beautiful waterfall. They decided to have a splash. 'On the countdown to zero,” said Timmy.'

Ok,' said Tom. '10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1, 0,' yelled Timmy.  Splash.  'that was amazing' said Tom 'oh look it's getting dark do you want to stay the night at my house' said Timmy 'shore' said Tom 'then what

are you waiting for let's go' said Timmy 'ok' said Tom so they went to  Timmy's house by the time they got there it was mid night.

In the morning they went off to have some breakfast yum said Tom. After having breakfast they went of to play outside together.

They decided to play tag.

It was lunch time when Tom and Timmy went into Timmy's house.

After lunch they went back to the beautiful waterfall it was amazing to look at.

Next they went behind the waterfall and they saw a little door, they opened it and almost fainted, it was a beautiful site. There were pink fluffy candy floss trees, watermelon houses and chocolatte water.

Just as they went in they saw a tiger go behind a house, they stepped back 'Tom do you really want to go in there with a Tiger' said Timmy

'No I don't' said Tom 'then let's go back to my home and have something to eat, I am starving' said

Timmy.

‘so am i’ said tom ‘do you want to race back to the house’ said timmy ‘ok’ said tom ‘on the count of five we will start running’ said Timmy ‘ok’ said Tom ‘1,2,3,4,5,’ said Timmy ‘go’ said Tom

wish they went as fast as a harakan ‘i won i won’ said Timmy ‘you don't need to brag on like that’ said Tom ‘sorry’ said Timmy ‘what is that coming along’ said Timmy ‘oh’ said Tom ‘its my brother’ said tom ‘your brother!’ said Timmy ‘quick lets run or i will not be able to play with you i will be doing chors for ever’ said tom ‘ for ever!’ said Timmy ‘yes’ said Tom ‘ quick run’ said Tom ‘ok’ said Timmy so they ran and ran to the deposit part of the woods ‘where are we’ said Tom ‘ah lost’ said Timmy ‘what’ said Tom ‘lost in the deposit part of the woods no i can not believe you how dear you’ said Tom ‘i i'm so sorry but you said to run so i did’ said Timmy ‘ i did not mean for you to run into the woods and get lost’ said Tom ‘oh i wish i was at home now doing chors for ever than being stuck here with a fox that does now how to get stuck in the woods’ said Tom ‘i am so so sorry when we get out i will pay you every piece of money i have’ said Timmy ‘yeah right’ said Tom ‘oh i wish this never happened’ said Timmy ‘so do i’ said Tom  ‘can we be friends still’ said Timmy ‘of course’ said Tom ‘yay’ said Timmy ‘hey maybe if you use your nose we can get out of here’ said Tom ‘great idea’ said timmy ‘i'll try it’ said Timmy ‘yay’ said Tom ‘look i think that is the way out’ said Timmy ‘it is well done’ said  Tom ‘now do you want to go to my house to have something to eat because i am starving’ said Timmy ‘so am i’ said Tom ‘ok so first we will go get something to eat then we will go play in the waterfall’ said Timmy ‘ok’ said Tom so they set off down to the water over the mountain and back to Timmy's house ‘yay we are finally here’ said Tom ‘where were you’ said Timmy's mum ‘i was going to look for you just then’ said Timmy's mum ‘ oh we were picking berries’ Said Timmy then they ran to Timmy's room ‘ way did you lie to your Mum’ said Tom ‘ so she makes her’ said Timmy ‘ her what’ said Tom ‘ shhh’ said Timmy ‘ why’ said Tom ‘ because here comes my mother’ said Timmy ‘oh’ said Tom.  so up the stairs came Timmy's mother ‘ boys dinner is ready’ she said ‘coming’ Tom and Timmy said then Timmy's mother went down the stairs and sat at the table ‘ we’d better go and have dinner’ said Tom ‘ yeah’ said Timmy so they went down the stairs and sat and ate dinner ‘ yum’ said Tom ‘ i no ’ said Timmy then Timmy's mother went to clean up ‘ boys can you help me please’ said Timmy's Mum ‘o'reilly’ said Timmy ‘ ok; said Tom ‘oh’ said Timmy ‘ good’ she said. So they helped her ‘ yay we're finished’ said Timmy ‘ now we can go play in the water by the waterfall’ said Tom ‘ yeah’ said Timmy ‘ quick let's go befor my Mum comes back’ said Timmy ‘okay let's do it” said Tom so off went Timmy and Tom. Then they both stopped ‘ can you hear that’ said Tom ‘ i shore can’ said Timmy ‘ w-hat should we do’ said Tom ‘ um’ said Timmy ‘ go back’ said Tom ‘ NO we have to see what is over there’ said said Timmy ‘ really i don't want to’ said Tom ‘ come on it will be an inventor’ said Timmy ‘uh fine’ said Tom ‘ yay’ said Timmy so they keeped going then they came across a path they followed it suddenly a big bear jumped and landed right in front of the two boys ‘ WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING THIS IS MY PATH AND MY HOME’ said the bear ‘ why should we’ said Timmy ‘ stop Timmy he might eat us” said Tom then the bear knocked out Tom and Timmy then put them in a kag when Tom and Timmy woke up they were puzzled ‘ where are we Tom’ said Timmy ‘ um i don't know’ said Tom ‘ look a bear maybe he can help us ‘ hey  Mr Bear can you help us get out of here’ said Tom ‘ wate said

Timmy ‘ what is it now’ said Tom ‘ he put us in here’ said Timmy ‘ haha very funny not’ said Tom ‘ it is trow’ said Timmy ‘ STOP lying’ said the angry Tom ‘ uh why want you believe me’ said Timmy ‘ because he looks like a nice bear’ said Tom ‘ NOT every one you think is nice muyt be mean you never know’ said Timmy ‘ yeah but’ said tom and then he stopped ‘ wate i remember you are right Timmy oh my my’ said Tom ‘ GO AWAY’ said Timmy

‘no why should i’ said the bear ‘ I SAID GO AWAY’ said Timmy ‘ cram down’ said tom ‘ and stop yelling’ said Tom

‘ fine, bear why won't you go away’ said Timmy ‘ because it is my home and you and your friend entered without permission’ said the bear ‘ BUT WE Did not know’ said Timmy ‘ you should make a sign so people now’ said Tom ‘ uh this net is uncomfortable’ said Tom ‘ yeah it is’ said Timmy ‘ plz let us out’ they said together ‘ uh fine, but dont come here again’ said the bear ‘ ok’ said Tom ‘ yip we won't come in here again’ said Timmy ‘ good’ said the bear and he let them out ‘thank you so much’ said Tom ‘ bye’ said Timmy ‘ quick let's get out of here’ said Tom in a quiet voice ‘ good i dear’ said Timmy in a quiet voice so they ran and ran when they got to timmy's home the sore Timmys mum ‘ WHERE were you’ she said ‘ um you see we were out for a long ‘ long’ said tom walk’ said timmy ‘ i see’ said Timmy's mum ‘ now let's go and have some dinner’ said Timmy ‘ i am hungry’ said Timmy ‘ hi Hungry i am Tom’ said Tom ‘ how funny NOT’ said Timmy ‘ hey’ said Tom ‘ stop fighting’ said Timmy's mother ‘ and go inside it is about to rain’ said Timmys mum then they ran into there home ‘ meet me in my room i need to go to the toilet’ said Timmy ‘ okay’ said Tom and then after Timmy went to the bathroom they had a lovely day oh no know i have to go back home’ said Tom ‘oh’ said Timmy ‘ bye’ said Tom ‘ wate  before you go go see my mum’ said Timmy ‘ okay’ said Tom so Tom went to see Timmys mum and told her that he is going home ‘ oh well tack theres home and enjoy them with your family and you are more than welcome to come and stay another day’ said Timmys mum ‘ thank you i will come see you when i can’ said Tom so then he went out the door. The End

Written by Pippa Osborne