this year

This year has been Amazing i love how at the start of the year hardly know one new each other and now we are like a family i just think this year has been great i hope all the year 6 have a great life and i think everyone had a amazing year i hope everyone at Parkvale school has a nice year and Christmas. Love Pippa

the rabbit Tom and fox Timmy

               

 

Once upon a time there lived a rabbit named Tom one day when Tom went to the stream to get

some water Tom saw a fox and his name was Timmy so Timmy the fox came over to Tom and said, 'do you want to come for a walk?’  ‘ok,' said Tom. 'Goode,'  said Timmy.

So they set off and went to the stream, as they got closer they saw a beautiful waterfall. They decided to have a splash. 'On the countdown to zero,” said Timmy.'

Ok,' said Tom. '10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1, 0,' yelled Timmy.  Splash.  'that was amazing' said Tom 'oh look it's getting dark do you want to stay the night at my house' said Timmy 'shore' said Tom 'then what

are you waiting for let's go' said Timmy 'ok' said Tom so they went to  Timmy's house by the time they got there it was mid night.

In the morning they went off to have some breakfast yum said Tom. After having breakfast they went of to play outside together.

They decided to play tag.

It was lunch time when Tom and Timmy went into Timmy's house.

After lunch they went back to the beautiful waterfall it was amazing to look at.

Next they went behind the waterfall and they saw a little door, they opened it and almost fainted, it was a beautiful site. There were pink fluffy candy floss trees, watermelon houses and chocolatte water.

Just as they went in they saw a tiger go behind a house, they stepped back 'Tom do you really want to go in there with a Tiger' said Timmy

'No I don't' said Tom 'then let's go back to my home and have something to eat, I am starving' said

Timmy.

‘so am i’ said tom ‘do you want to race back to the house’ said timmy ‘ok’ said tom ‘on the count of five we will start running’ said Timmy ‘ok’ said Tom ‘1,2,3,4,5,’ said Timmy ‘go’ said Tom

wish they went as fast as a harakan ‘i won i won’ said Timmy ‘you don't need to brag on like that’ said Tom ‘sorry’ said Timmy ‘what is that coming along’ said Timmy ‘oh’ said Tom ‘its my brother’ said tom ‘your brother!’ said Timmy ‘quick lets run or i will not be able to play with you i will be doing chors for ever’ said tom ‘ for ever!’ said Timmy ‘yes’ said Tom ‘ quick run’ said Tom ‘ok’ said Timmy so they ran and ran to the deposit part of the woods ‘where are we’ said Tom ‘ah lost’ said Timmy ‘what’ said Tom ‘lost in the deposit part of the woods no i can not believe you how dear you’ said Tom ‘i i'm so sorry but you said to run so i did’ said Timmy ‘ i did not mean for you to run into the woods and get lost’ said Tom ‘oh i wish i was at home now doing chors for ever than being stuck here with a fox that does now how to get stuck in the woods’ said Tom ‘i am so so sorry when we get out i will pay you every piece of money i have’ said Timmy ‘yeah right’ said Tom ‘oh i wish this never happened’ said Timmy ‘so do i’ said Tom  ‘can we be friends still’ said Timmy ‘of course’ said Tom ‘yay’ said Timmy ‘hey maybe if you use your nose we can get out of here’ said Tom ‘great idea’ said timmy ‘i'll try it’ said Timmy ‘yay’ said Tom ‘look i think that is the way out’ said Timmy ‘it is well done’ said  Tom ‘now do you want to go to my house to have something to eat because i am starving’ said Timmy ‘so am i’ said Tom ‘ok so first we will go get something to eat then we will go play in the waterfall’ said Timmy ‘ok’ said Tom so they set off down to the water over the mountain and back to Timmy's house ‘yay we are finally here’ said Tom ‘where were you’ said Timmy's mum ‘i was going to look for you just then’ said Timmy's mum ‘ oh we were picking berries’ Said Timmy then they ran to Timmy's room ‘ way did you lie to your Mum’ said Tom ‘ so she makes her’ said Timmy ‘ her what’ said Tom ‘ shhh’ said Timmy ‘ why’ said Tom ‘ because here comes my mother’ said Timmy ‘oh’ said Tom.  so up the stairs came Timmy's mother ‘ boys dinner is ready’ she said ‘coming’ Tom and Timmy said then Timmy's mother went down the stairs and sat at the table ‘ we’d better go and have dinner’ said Tom ‘ yeah’ said Timmy so they went down the stairs and sat and ate dinner ‘ yum’ said Tom ‘ i no ’ said Timmy then Timmy's mother went to clean up ‘ boys can you help me please’ said Timmy's Mum ‘o'reilly’ said Timmy ‘ ok; said Tom ‘oh’ said Timmy ‘ good’ she said. So they helped her ‘ yay we're finished’ said Timmy ‘ now we can go play in the water by the waterfall’ said Tom ‘ yeah’ said Timmy ‘ quick let's go befor my Mum comes back’ said Timmy ‘okay let's do it” said Tom so off went Timmy and Tom. Then they both stopped ‘ can you hear that’ said Tom ‘ i shore can’ said Timmy ‘ w-hat should we do’ said Tom ‘ um’ said Timmy ‘ go back’ said Tom ‘ NO we have to see what is over there’ said said Timmy ‘ really i don't want to’ said Tom ‘ come on it will be an inventor’ said Timmy ‘uh fine’ said Tom ‘ yay’ said Timmy so they keeped going then they came across a path they followed it suddenly a big bear jumped and landed right in front of the two boys ‘ WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING THIS IS MY PATH AND MY HOME’ said the bear ‘ why should we’ said Timmy ‘ stop Timmy he might eat us” said Tom then the bear knocked out Tom and Timmy then put them in a kag when Tom and Timmy woke up they were puzzled ‘ where are we Tom’ said Timmy ‘ um i don't know’ said Tom ‘ look a bear maybe he can help us ‘ hey  Mr Bear can you help us get out of here’ said Tom ‘ wate said

Timmy ‘ what is it now’ said Tom ‘ he put us in here’ said Timmy ‘ haha very funny not’ said Tom ‘ it is trow’ said Timmy ‘ STOP lying’ said the angry Tom ‘ uh why want you believe me’ said Timmy ‘ because he looks like a nice bear’ said Tom ‘ NOT every one you think is nice muyt be mean you never know’ said Timmy ‘ yeah but’ said tom and then he stopped ‘ wate i remember you are right Timmy oh my my’ said Tom ‘ GO AWAY’ said Timmy

‘no why should i’ said the bear ‘ I SAID GO AWAY’ said Timmy ‘ cram down’ said tom ‘ and stop yelling’ said Tom

‘ fine, bear why won't you go away’ said Timmy ‘ because it is my home and you and your friend entered without permission’ said the bear ‘ BUT WE Did not know’ said Timmy ‘ you should make a sign so people now’ said Tom ‘ uh this net is uncomfortable’ said Tom ‘ yeah it is’ said Timmy ‘ plz let us out’ they said together ‘ uh fine, but dont come here again’ said the bear ‘ ok’ said Tom ‘ yip we won't come in here again’ said Timmy ‘ good’ said the bear and he let them out ‘thank you so much’ said Tom ‘ bye’ said Timmy ‘ quick let's get out of here’ said Tom in a quiet voice ‘ good i dear’ said Timmy in a quiet voice so they ran and ran when they got to timmy's home the sore Timmys mum ‘ WHERE were you’ she said ‘ um you see we were out for a long ‘ long’ said tom walk’ said timmy ‘ i see’ said Timmy's mum ‘ now let's go and have some dinner’ said Timmy ‘ i am hungry’ said Timmy ‘ hi Hungry i am Tom’ said Tom ‘ how funny NOT’ said Timmy ‘ hey’ said Tom ‘ stop fighting’ said Timmy's mother ‘ and go inside it is about to rain’ said Timmys mum then they ran into there home ‘ meet me in my room i need to go to the toilet’ said Timmy ‘ okay’ said Tom and then after Timmy went to the bathroom they had a lovely day oh no know i have to go back home’ said Tom ‘oh’ said Timmy ‘ bye’ said Tom ‘ wate  before you go go see my mum’ said Timmy ‘ okay’ said Tom so Tom went to see Timmys mum and told her that he is going home ‘ oh well tack theres home and enjoy them with your family and you are more than welcome to come and stay another day’ said Timmys mum ‘ thank you i will come see you when i can’ said Tom so then he went out the door. The End

Written by Pippa Osborne